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Writing A Novel: How To Skip Ahead In Time Smoothly

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Writing a novel is like fishing without a rod or a net or a boat. Or arms or legs or a body. Fishing as a ghost…


Nothing You Haven’t Seen Before

You might be wondering exactly what we mean by ‘skip ahead’, so we thought we’d clear that up first. We refer to these as internal transitions. That translates to transitions that take place within the scene: the action moves to a new time or place but is not separated with a scene break (when the paragraphs split) or a chapter break – it just continues inside the same scene.

You’ll have seen this done in writing many times before, usually when the characters are engaged in something mundane (such as searching for something on a computer or riding in a car) or when they need to get from one place to another without it dragging on.

There are a few things you must take notice of when writing these internal transitions. You don’t want them to seem too jumpy or the reader will lose interest. You don’t want them to drag on too long or the reader will lose interest.

So, how exactly do you want them?


Crisp And Purposeful

That’s how.

First, let’s go into when you should steer clear of using the internal transition. If the skip ahead you’re making is any longer than five hours, we’d recommend using a scene or chapter break instead. That’s purely for pacing reasons. The reader will feel like they’re being tossed ahead randomly if the skipped amount of time is too large.

If the amount of time you skip is within that five hour mark, there are two different styles of skipping ahead you could try. They should both be done in different scenarios and for different reasons.

Scenario one is the simpler of the two. If you’re skipping ahead in time purely to transition through something mundane and boring, and don’t need to give any context because nothing of importance takes place, you simply tell of the skip ahead and then carry on with the scene.

Scenario two is a little more complex. This is done when you want to skip over something but still need to give the reader some detail or summary. We call this the mini flashback. You use them if the time period you skipped over contained something important: something that is relevant either later in the scene, or later in the overall plot.

We’ll show you the execution of both with some examples below.


Examples

They arrived at the station half an hour later. The doors swung open and Quinn stepped out, hugging his coffee as if it were his newborn son. The sun cast a ray of false promises across the ground in front of him. False because it was freezing. Hence the coffee-canoodling.


They arrived at the station half an hour later. During the journey, Quinn had mentioned the relevance of Jack Till, the man Patricia was seen with. They had spoken about how likely a suspect he really was. Why had he been with her? What was the connection?

Quinn stepped out, hugging his coffee as if it were his newborn son. The sun cast a ray of false promises across the ground in front of him. False because it was freezing. Hence the coffee-canoodling.


Make Sense?

The first example is what you’d do if nothing relevant happened. You’d just skip ahead and get on with the scene. The second example is how you’d position things before moving on with the next part of the writing. Make sense? Good.

Have a play around and try some of these techniques in your writing. Maybe you already have scenes that this can apply to, and would benefit from implementing these guidelines. Whatever the case, be sure to keep these tips in that mind of yours – they are really useful when it comes to great flow and pacing.

And great flow and pacing are two hugely important things. Why? Because they make for a very happy reader.

A Writing Prompt: Grit

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The Purpose

Earlier this week with our poetry prompt, we tried out some detailed descriptions – descriptions that focus on one thing for a long time and get very, well, poetic… Funny, right? That a poem would be poetic…

You get the point.

And point is, we’re going to put what we learned on Monday to the test. We’re going to go real detailed again, but this time, it’s going to be in story style as opposed to poetic form.


The Prompt

It had been much too long since Billy Graham smelled the funfair.

The popcorn hit him first, sweet and salted both at once, as if the stall didn’t sell them separately, but instead as a combination. Next came the hotdogs, filling one nostril; donuts filled the other. Again, sweet and savoury. The scents of his life.

He put down his bag and pulled his cap to his brow. For now, he had arrived.


Try this prompt for size and create something based on it. If you do write something, please share it with us in one way or another. Tag us in a post, post it in the comments, send it to us in an email – we’d love to read your work.

Who knows? If you send something our way and we really like the way you write, we might just offer you a discount on our editing services. Or we might even edit a few chapters for free. It’s worth a try on your part.

You can reach us with your submission or with any questions/inquiries here.

DISCLAIMER: These prompts are here for you to use however you like. You can use them to aid you in short story inspiration for competitions, or even for full-length novels. They’re yours. Consider them your little gift – from us, to you. Do with them as you wish!

Writing A Novel: Don’t Wrestle With Futility

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Writing a novel is like navigating the world in eighteen days, on foot, and you’re blind, and you have no feet.


Too Much Thought

Writers around the world share the exact same problem: they overthink like crazy.

It’s no huge secret… the community is filled with this evidence. But, that doesn’t make it an acceptable analysis. It’s not a good thing to overthink your every move. It only leads to negative self-analysis and a lack of productivity – two things the growing novelist (or any writer under any format) cannot afford to battle with.

We know that it’s hard to avoid.

Writers spend a lot of time in their heads. That’s the way of the beast. (Not that we’re calling you a beast, but you get the expression.) While spending a long period of time in no other company than that of your own mind, you’re bound to experience some hardship: thoughts. Or a lack of them.


Where Overthinking Stems From

If you ask us, overthinking comes from a dark part of your mind. It comes from that little voice in your head that tells you bad things; that tells you falsities. It’ll say that you aren’t good enough, that you never will be, that you never have been. And then you start to believe this, and subsequently, you think about it too much.

Once you get into those depths, it’s tough to pull yourself out.

In essence, overthinking comes from negativity. Don’t beat yourself up about it – it’s not your fault. Science has shown that most of the negativity you naturally produce is down to a couple of predominant factors: biology (how you’re naturally made up), and external influences during your earlier life.

Someone, or something, filled your head with negativity, and now you need to get it out.


A Specific Type Of Overthinking

We’re going to break this down into a very writerly problem. This is something you can all relate to, and by breaking this down, we hope to show you why this (and overthinking in general) is a pointless process to put yourself through.

You know when you’re working on something – a novel, a play, a poem, a short story – and you’re just not feeling it? Well, what if we told you that you need not overthink that? What if we told you that overthinking is the exact opposite of what you need to do?

Because that’s what we’re telling you.

If ever you’re writing something, and feel for more than one second that you don’t want to write it anymore, stop writing it. Now, that doesn’t mean forever. It just meas that for now, don’t do it. It doesn’t require any further thought. Put down your pen, close your laptop, switch off your mind.

Rest and breathe. Breathe and rest.

We lead short lives. You should never have to spend a single second doing anything you aren’t enjoying. That’s your number one rule, and you have to get extreme with it. Even if this project is something you’ve been working on for years… if that fire dies out, ditch it. Who knows? You may never return. And that’s fine too.

You have to follow your heart and instincts. Writing is predicated on those two factors.


Take A Break And Reassess

It’s as simple and as complicated as that. Just shut it off and refuse to overthink. If you find yourself slipping into that trap, shut your mind off from anything that isn’t positive. Play some very loud music, close your eyes, and let yourself drift into a state of nothingness.

That’s how you tackle overthinking. If something’s not right, stop doing it.

You must simply make sense of your decision; remind yourself that you’re always right. You wouldn’t continue to drive if you knew you were going to run out of fuel. It’s much the same in writing.

A Poetry Prompt: Swelling Tide

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The Purpose

You know we believe in poetry as a tool to improve your novel writing. That’s the reason we share these prompts – they can be for poets or novelists, and will be useful for honing the craft of both.

The purpose of this one is to focus on really close detail.

We want you to pen the whole piece in one tone, covering nothing more than the intricate details of the swelling tide. Get obscenely poetic with it, and push your voice to its limit. This will help you to develop a great sense of what works well in your writing, allowing you to carry these descriptions over to your novel writing.


The Prompt

Scenery/Vibe: The shoreline. Some sand and some rocks. But mainly water: jumping and swilling and bobbing and caressing.

Poem’s Message: Many things happen in life, but we can tune mostly anything out by placing insane levels of concentration on a particular thing or task.

Beach

Try this prompt for size and create something based on it. If you do write something, please share it with us in one way or another. Tag us in a post, post it in the comments, send it to us in an email – we’d love to read your work.

Who knows? If you send something our way and we really like the way you write, we might just offer you a discount on our editing services. Or we might even edit a few chapters for free. It’s worth a try on your part.

You can reach us with your submission or with any questions/inquiries here.

DISCLAIMER: These prompts are here for you to use however you like. You can use them to aid you and give inspiration for competitions, or even for full-length poetry collections. They’re yours. Consider them your little gift – from us, to you. Do with them as you wish!

A Writing Prompt: Two Wrongs Make A Crime Scene

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The Purpose

This prompt comes at you a little differently today. It’s Friday – why not have some fun?

Now, you may not enjoy writing or reading crime as a genre, but that doesn’t mean you should avoid using it in your plot. You can include crime and criminality in books outside of that genre – there’s a lot of freedom in writing these days.

You should definitely consider it.

Crime adds tons of versatility and tension to a plot. If you’re cooking up a deeply intricate tale between two newlyweds, imagine the shock the reader will feel if a dead body turns up on their doorstep.

Now, in a crime book, that’s when the detectives’ POV would take over and the real plot would begin. But in our romance, it goes deeper. The details or MO or evidence – none of that is discussed. Instead, the reader is shown how that traumatic event affects their relationship. You could even get totally out there and use the body as a deep (and slightly sick and twisted) metaphor.

Writing knows no bounds!


The Prompt

He pauses in the doorway, the beginnings of a smile spreading on his lips, and next to it, the blood. It sinks into the dimples on his cheeks, seeping into the once-innocent skin and tainting it with evil.

He takes two steps. Not one, not one and a quarter. But two, full and long. And then he drops the body on the doorstep for the entire world to see.

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Try this prompt for size and create something based on it. If you do write something, please share it with us in one way or another. Tag us in a post, post it in the comments, send it to us in an email – we’d love to read your work.

Who knows? If you send something our way and we really like the way you write, we might just offer you a discount on our editing services. Or we might even edit a few chapters for free. It’s worth a try on your part.

You can reach us with your submission or with any questions/inquiries here.

DISCLAIMER: These prompts are here for you to use however you like. You can use them to aid you in short story inspiration for competitions, or even for full-length novels. They’re yours. Consider them your little gift – from us, to you. Do with them as you wish!

 

Writing A Novel: Do You Need A Prologue?

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Writing a novel is like journeying the ocean…

But in this instance, you’ve no boat, no equipment, and you can’t bleeding swim!

(That, our writing friends, is a very English expression…)


An Ever-Growing Debate

It’s a topic we see a lot in the community: in heated discussions on Twitter, rage-infused debates in Instagram comments, back-and-forth arguments on Facebook. That’s one thing we’re starting to notice.

Where there’s a group of passionate people who are well versed in the art of words, there’s always something – something – to debate. That’s how life in the writing community goes. Someone says something, someone else disagrees; hellfire ensues.

Okay, so maybe it’s not that crazy…

We think we need to add more fuel to the fire, though. And today, we’re going to do just that. The topic of this debate? Prologues. Are they needed? If so, when?

Stick around, we’re about to explore!


Mastering The Art

There’s a harsh truth to be delivered here. If you’re someone who doesn’t like reading prologues, it’s likely that you don’t like writing them. And if you don’t like writing them, it’s likely that you don’t fully understand the perfect method of construction.

We’re nice. We’re going to go into that.

The prologue, first and foremost, should be something the reader reads and then forgets by chapter four. Sounds a little backwards, right? Well, here’s the catch: forget by chapter four until… they remember it again; until it all comes crashing back in one of those almighty ah-ha! moments.

The prologue gives backstory, a part of the plot that is unrelated until it’s not – that’s where the moment of realisation comes from. That’s also why they’re so hard to do well. If a writer doesn’t have the perfect sub-story to deliver in the prologue, the prologue won’t work. Period.

Even if the wordsmith-ery (yes, we went there) was a divine, damn-near perfect representation of literary genius, the prologue would not work if the chosen event wasn’t strong enough.


What To Do Instead

When deciding if your novel needs a prologue, ask yourself two simple questions: can the backstory I wish to give be included via a more natural means (flashbacks, contextual telling, back-to-front structure)? If not, you go on to the next question: is it entirely relevant?

That’s the thing… The most common reason to include a prologue is to detail a past happening; a past happening that sent the pendulum swinging, that set the meat of the rest of the story in motion. And the thing you have to tackle is simple: the timing and the structure.

Truth is, almost every prologue ever could be presented differently, sprinkled through the story in snippets by using well-timed and executed flashbacks. But, that would cause a lot of extra work, and in that, a lot of extra places in which you could royally mess up.

To simplify: the prologue was born.

Now, all you do is  write that backstory, give all the intricate details, and then move on into the actual story. Just make sure that you don’t dance with the ultimate devil: always – always!!! – ensure that your prologue is given a purpose somewhere during the rest of the story. If the reader doesn’t come across something (an event, a character, a location) that they can relate back to it, it is ultimately, indefinitely futile.


An Example:

Below, we’ll give you some practicality. We’ll outline some details (part of a story outline, if you will) that will show you exactly what types of things a prologue should include. This is going to be an example of a story that requires a prologue.

EXAMPLE: The plot is simple: a newly qualified detective is on his first assignment: a double homicide. Both victims are female. Both were strangled (we know, but the cliches are always best). BLAH-BLAH-BLAH, CRIME-SPIEL, CRIME-SPIEL, CRIME-SPIEL.

Now, the prologue detail.

Your protagonist’s past is pain-burdened beyond repair. When he was six year’s old, he bore witness to the passing of his mother. As she was strangled to death. In her own living room. Much like the two victims of his first case (and the three that follow).

Where does the prologue come into it? Well, with his past, of course.

Thing is, the reader never actually knows about his dead mother (or at least the details) until it is revealed at the end. What makes the reveal so shocking? It is the same killer now – the same man who murdered the detective’s mother. He is back on the loose. (That is revealed at the end.)

Imagine having to give all that pain and suffering in flashback form throughout the novel. Imagine how much pain and suffering it would in turn bring to you. Nope. We wouldn’t fancy it.

The solution? A prologue. Just one 600 word scene at the very start, before the book even begins. It shows two things: a woman being strangled in a living room, and a young boy, watching over the evil in horrified silence.

When it is revealed (by the killer, no less) that it was him – he is the guy who killed the detective’s mom – the reader will lose their mind. They’ll flashback to that random, unexplained scene from the very beginning and… AH-HA!

Ah-ha, indeed.


Only When Necessary

To give our final thoughts: yes, prologues are wonderful, and still have their place, but only when they are strictly necessary. That translates directly to: don’t just write one because it makes you feel like Hemingway; write one because that’s what your story needs.

If you can give the details in flashbacks and with past tense context – do that. If that sounds like an absolute nightmare among nightmares, and like it might require an inadvisable amount of whiskey, you need a bloody prologue!

A Poetry Prompt: Wingless Angel


The Purpose:

Okay, hopeless romantics, this week’s poetry prompt goes out to you.

Love is one of the most popular sub-topics in the wonderful world of poetry. Throughout time, literary greats have churned out love poem after love poem, as if no other emotions exist. Some of the greatest pieces ever were centred around love, mainly because it’s such a versatile, deeply relatable topic.

Everyone knows how it feels to love; to be loved. It’s the only thing we truly have.

But, have you ever considered the effects penning love poems can have on your novel writing? Because trust us, it can work wonders for your prose. How? Very simply: when you write poetry about love, you go deep and narrow as opposed to shallow and wide. If you mimic this in your novel, your characterisation is going to be so much stronger.


The Prompt

Scenery/Vibe: Big city. Dusk. Red skies. Tall buildings. Reflective skylines. A cold patch beside you on the empty park bench.

Poem’s Message: The world will always go on around you, but nothing will pull you from the face of it like losing someone you love.

Woman Wearing Blue Jacket

Try this prompt for size and create something based on it. If you do write something, please share it with us in one way or another. Tag us in a post, post it in the comments, send it to us in an email – we’d love to read your work.

Who knows? If you send something our way and we really like the way you write, we might just offer you a discount on our editing services. Or we might even edit a few chapters for free. It’s worth a try on your part.

You can reach us with your submission or with any questions/inquiries here.

DISCLAIMER: These prompts are here for you to use however you like. You can use them to aid you and give inspiration for competitions, or even for full-length poetry collections. They’re yours. Consider them your little gift – from us, to you. Do with them as you wish!

 

A Writing Prompt: A Lie Amid The Truth

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The Purpose


This prompt is going to stir all kinds of terribly beautiful ideas.

On this wonderful Friday, we’re taking it back to tension. We’re going to paint a scenario that fills your head with lots of insane twists and turns. By the end of this prompt, you’ll have thought of and outlined an entire plot for the next Gone Girl!

Okay, let’s not go that far… But still, this prompt is going to be awesome.

Focus on the tension, and give the reader a shocking reveal that’ll knock their socks off. No matter what genre you write, this is a useful skill to have. Shocking reveals are great to make use of in all genres, especially at the end of your chapters, when you’re trying to encourage the reader to carry on reading.


The Prompt


There’s no place like home.

That’s what she thinks when she walks through the door. It had been a terribly stressful day at the office. She spent her day doing coffee rounds that no one thanked her for and filing reports that no one read. She often wonders if there’s any point.

But not at home. She’s a different person entirely when she returns home. Here, with Martin around, all her worries fade away. They melt into the ground around her as soon as she slips out of her heels. She leaves them in that puddle of worry, an indicator of just how much she hates what she does.

Martin appears in the living room doorway right on cue. He smiles his Martin smile and steps towards her, one hand out in front and the other behind his back, resting on the object he is concealing there.


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Try this prompt for size and create something based on it. If you do write something, please share it with us in one way or another. Tag us in a post, post it in the comments, send it to us in an email – we’d love to read your work.

Who knows? If you send something our way and we really like the way you write, we might just offer you a discount on our editing services. Or we might even edit a few chapters for free. It’s worth a try on your part.

You can reach us with your submission or with any questions/inquiries here.

DISCLAIMER: These prompts are here for you to use however you like. You can use them to aid you in short story inspiration for competitions, or even for full-length novels. They’re yours. Consider them your little gift – from us, to you. Do with them as you wish!

Writing A Novel: Dealing With The Paralysis Of Writer’s Block

Writing a novel is like skydiving.

The only problem is, you don’t have a parachute.


Where There’s A Will…


…there’s an over-stressed writer.

Look, we know how it gets. You get a project in your mind, you plan it out, you think it through; you become utterly obsessed with every single aspect of it. You spend all your time (at your day job, while you’re shopping, at the gym, out with your friends) consumed by this project. Everything about it is on your mind, at all times, every day.

But then the time comes… That time where you can do it, where you actually have the free time to write. And what happens? The inside of your mind does its best impression of a nuclear explosion and your brain turns to radiation-fuelled mush.

Or something like that…


Making An Analysis


No matter what metaphor (good or bad) you choose to use to describe it, the facts remain the facts: for all your obsession, all your desire, you’re unable to write. You’re unable to form a single sentence, pen a single word. And it baffles you. It really does.

It’s something we think a lot about too.

Why do writers – the people who crave their story most – struggle so badly to thrive alongside it? To grow with the words and prosper as the plot blossoms? Why, for all their drive and ambition, do they hit that indescribable wall?

We have our theories. Obsession is at the heart of those theories.

It sounds like the right thing, doesn’t it, to become obsessed with what you love; with what you want to do in life? Of course it does. But when you think about it deeper, on a more mind-specific level, it could likely cause more harm than anything else. How and why? Because obsession, when coupled with the desire to succeed and be successful (in anything, not just writing), leads to paralysis.

It’s this paralysis that is your enemy. It’s this paralysis that stops you in your tracks and prevents you from working on your beloved story. It’s this paralysis that you must learn to defeat.


Take A Step Back


Let’s go real primitive here. It’s usually the primitive solutions that have the best positive outcomes and effects. So, primitively speaking, what is the best way to solve a problem? The answer is simple. You discover the route – the source – of the problem, and rewire it at its core.

We know… it’s a lot harder than that. But that is the solution.

How do you apply this to your problem, to your need to create but your inability to act on that desire? In exactly the same way. You find the source (which we already know to be the obsession) and you rewire it.

It’s time to eliminate this obsession. And trust us, that takes just as much work as you think.

Rewiring your brain is no easy feat. To put it plainly, it can actually be impossible. But that doesn’t mean you shouldn’t try. For if you manage, your writing career and happiness will surely prosper.

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Here’s our best advice:

Live in the present moment.

Make a point of scolding yourself whenever you aren’t living in the here and now. If you’re at your day job, and start obsessing about the relevance of a character, push that thought out of your mind. Tell yourself: no, I’m not going to let that thought exist right now. And then get on with the task at hand.

What this does is prevent any unhealthy thoughts. It’s a great thing, to think about your story and your characters and the wonderful world you’re creating, but only when you can do something about it. Thinking things through when you’re somewhere else, living in a different aspect of your life, leads to overthinking, and overthinking leads to over-obsession, and that, our writer friends, leads to paralysis.


You Need To Try


Please, if you’re struggling with this sort of thing, you really need to try. You need to push those thoughts from your mind. Make a rule of it: you’re not allowed to think about anything that you can’t act on in the next five minutes.

Now, that doesn’t mean you can’t plan and debate things or future projects. Those are both great things to do. What it means is simpler than that: only think about those things when you’ve planned time to think about them. That way your time management is better, as well as your mental state.

And seriously, if anyone who reads this is struggling – like, even just a little – with this sort of thing, please get in touch. We’re always happy to help you out. We’re not just a writing services company, we’re a team of people who know what you’re going through.

We’ll always – always – be here to make your writing life the beautiful journey you deserve.

A Poetry Prompt: Smiles

Baby Approaching Men's Black Sunglasses


The Purpose


This week’s prompt is here, and its mission is to spread the happiest of happy vibes. We’re all about the positivity here, and we wanted to kick things off this week with a truckload of it.

From a writing skills perspective, we’re going to use this one to work on our emotive writing. Really hone those metaphors and similes in a way that paints a beautiful picture and pulls at the reader’s heartstrings.

This is a useful thing to get the hang of – even if you aren’t a poet.

As with everything else in poetry writing, once you master this, you can apply it to your short stories and novels – or any writing of that style. Including poetic passages in these types of work can really engage the reader and draw their attention to a particular character dynamic or scene description.


The Prompt


Scenery/Vibe: The park. On the swings. The sky is bright and so are the smiles. It’s your happy place. It’s that way for both of you.

Poems’s Message: If the sky and smiles are equally bright, what do you have to worry about?


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Try this prompt for size and create something based on it. If you do write something, please share it with us in one way or another. Tag us in a post, post it in the comments, send it to us in an email – we’d love to read your work.

Who knows? If you send something our way and we really like the way you write, we might just offer you a discount on our editing services. Or we might even edit a few chapters for free. It’s worth a try on your part.

You can reach us with your submission or with any questions/inquiries here.

DISCLAIMER: These prompts are here for you to use however you like. You can use them to aid you and give inspiration for competitions, or even for full-length poetry collections. They’re yours. Consider them your little gift – from us, to you. Do with them as you wish!

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